The lost Self

The girl who was once so bubbly,
Who used to speak whatever she felt,
Now she’s like a heated, silent noon
Where no one dares to peep into her soul.

She who was once an amber fountain,
Who could imagine a wilderness of imagery—
How did this soul of meadows
Turn into a garden of thorns?

She who could even write a world,
Whose mighty pen held the colors of a rainbow,
Now, in the spur of a moment,
Has lost all her brightness.

A soul of artistry, abandoned
Under the weight of duties and burdens.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gifford Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Likewise.
Gifford Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 4:15 AM
Hello Srijita, a very touching write. Beautifully said. This piece sums up how I feel, I tell myself it’s a phase and it will pass, I just need to ride it out. Have a great day, fellow poet.
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October 29, 2025 at 4:39 AM
Thanks for your warm comment. Please keep supporting newcomers like me.
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