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'the Lost Feather'

A feather lost glides, drifting, it soars, in the mighty wind, it twirls and swirls, as if dancing; once, the People owned all the wilderness, they called it home, now they watch it be destroyed. There, high upon a sheer jagged, rocky cliff, an appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic; there, under a blazing azure sky above, an Ojibwa girl looks at the beautiful land of Canada. There, in that mighty wind that roars and howls, eagle feathers in my hair and on my horse gently flutter; there, below the Ottawa River thunders, and the vast lands of wilderness stretch to the horizon. There, above in that cloudless sky canopy, eagles fly, symbolizing the Peoples spirit and strength; there, in my dream, I am one with my ancestors, the only sound is the wind that moves the fluttering feathers. A feather lost glides, drifting, it soars, in the mighty wind, it twirls and swirls, as if dancing; once, the People owned all the wilderness, they called it home, now they watch it be destroyed. ____________________________ April 29, 2016 Poetry/Verse/'The Lost Feather' Copyright Protected, ID 16-1149-942-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Your Choice, Any Form, Any theme Brian Strand First Place
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Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Congrats D.H.!
La France Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:15 AM
LJ, thanks for visiting and for the congrats !
Laurie Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:51 PM
Hello Dear Heart …. from a time when humans knew that they just one part of nature and treated it that way. It could never last once commercialism and greed took over - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay
La France Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Lindsay, this is one of my favorite poems , I like to write in dreams and I like to write of my ancestors ~
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Excellent poem. Heartiest congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win!
La France Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Edward, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:00 PM
The majesty and poignant sadness. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations !
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June 5, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Congrats on your well deserved top honors with this gold medal win, Constance.
La France Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Line, thank you for the congrats and compliment ~
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