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The Loss

Constantly I feel the pain Just like earth feels the rain I still hear the echo of your voice I still perceive the saint of your innocence Even now, after people have paid their condolences The river keeps rushing from my eyes Why do you have to go? Is this what eternity means? Why go when you could have stayed? I desperately need some answers The iron of sorrow keeps stabbing my heart Weakening it every moment Why talk when i can not hear you anymore remembering your word ignites fear in me Our dreams, now a shattered pieces of hope I just keep praying for the power to cope And the rivers of tears to stop flowing Your words are now like a fog We are now worlds apart One end for the living The other for the dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/9/2017 6:07:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, yeah when someone you loved so much went away from you the feeling almost feel physical and you yhink that you re finished and life became way more difficult to live however I m new on this site and have poems of similar category and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 6/9/2017 6:51:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, Faraz. It's so nice to have you here. Thanks for your lovely comment and it would be great to read your poems too. Have a lovely stay here.

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