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The Lord of the Ring

When all the doors you pass are shut, And all the roads you travel are blocked, When the life seems to be dump and dull, And the luck seems to be locked. Leave not the rope of the hope, Even if you so feeble feel, Make your mind and call your courage, It brings in the brain zest and zeal. Have not you heard the spider's struggle, That showed the path to Bruce the king, Who thought and fought to gain his glory, That made him finally the lord of the ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/29/2014 4:06:00 PM
Very good job...You are absolutely right...We shall overcome...Thank you very much from India...
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Date: 10/29/2014 8:11:00 AM
a nice reminder we all struggle
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Date: 10/29/2014 4:48:00 AM
Nicely written!
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:15:00 AM
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Date: 9/11/2014 3:23:00 PM
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