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The Look In Her Eyes

No, it isn't what you think
when I say I was enraptured
by the look in her eyes--
the eyes were those of a woman
who was dying and knew she 
was dying....

I did not know her well--
she was the wife of someone 
my wife worked with in the
prosaic world, the world of time
and schedules and appointments,
the world of taxes and getting
and spending and eating and
sleeping and making love (for 
the lucky ones), a world filled
with the nightly news and TV
and a relentless social media,
a world that both commands
and ignores--but not the world
this woman was soon to leave
for, an unique voyage she must
take all alone: somehow she knew 
this as she lay small and quiet
in her hospice bed--
past speaking any more,
not even to her old husband.

But though quiet as a mouse
or a saint, yet she smiled, at
all in the room it seemed,
though when I went in turn
to say my good-bye to this
near-stranger, I thought,
'She's smiling at me!' and 
then I thought--
'She looks happy!'--
but how can that be 
I wondered...until her eyes
gleamed with a light I have 
never seen before in human
eyes--it was her soul I knew
that knew, and her soul had
no fear, death being less than
air, less than nothing to it--
her soul was ready.

[posted 4/29/21]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/1/2021 8:00:00 AM
Indeed, a Fantastic Poem. So many of your works are really beautiful.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/3/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 5/30/2021 2:15:00 PM
this is fantastic. I do believe some people can see themselves being called away to the light, and this in turn lights up their countenance.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/1/2021 7:36:00 AM
More so than is generally realized, I suspect--thanks Andrea!
Date: 5/26/2021 9:06:00 AM
A touching, convincing and inspiring story told with skill and sensitivity. A brilliant combination of descriptive writing and enlightened sentiment. I am impressed, Len
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/26/2021 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Geoff--I suspect you're like me and not impressed easily-so it means a lot coming from you, my friend!
Date: 5/18/2021 7:54:00 AM
Wow congrats on your win, this poem is special to me and all those who strongly believe this world isn't it, that there is a better place depending on our actions an afterlife that we all go to come death, that's why the light of the soul shines in dying eyes. Kudos for how you depicted it all so eloquently. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/20/2021 12:35:00 PM
O yes, this world is more illusion than substance, more dream than reality compared to Eternity...thanks!
Date: 5/11/2021 7:58:00 AM
Oh! Beautiful Eye-Soul!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/11/2021 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/2/2021 3:02:00 PM
Absolutely a wonderful write! I love the message with the stage you have set. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/3/2021 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Mark, much appreciated!
Date: 5/1/2021 11:17:00 AM
Powerful and elegant written with the dignity of the woman in your poem LJ! Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/3/2021 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I'm glad you liked it--may we all find such grace in our passing...
Date: 5/1/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in this contest, Carber. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘EMBRACE & RELEASE’. God bless!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/3/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thanks, and may you go with God always....

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