The Look In Her Eyes

No, it isn't what you think
when I say I was enraptured
by the look in her eyes--
the eyes were those of a woman
who was dying and knew she 
was dying....

I did not know her well--
she was the wife of someone 
my wife worked with in the
prosaic world, the world of time
and schedules and appointments,
the world of taxes and getting
and spending and eating and
sleeping and making love (for 
the lucky ones), a world filled
with the nightly news and TV
and a relentless social media,
a world that both commands
and ignores--but not the world
this woman was soon to leave
for, an unique voyage she must
take all alone: somehow she knew 
this as she lay small and quiet
in her hospice bed--
past speaking any more,
not even to her old husband.

But though quiet as a mouse
or a saint, yet she smiled, at
all in the room it seemed,
though when I went in turn
to say my good-bye to this
near-stranger, I thought,
'She's smiling at me!' and 
then I thought--
'She looks happy!'--
but how can that be 
I wondered...until her eyes
gleamed with a light I have 
never seen before in human
eyes--it was her soul I knew
that knew, and her soul had
no fear, death being less than
air, less than nothing to it--
her soul was ready.

[posted 4/29/21]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Indeed, a Fantastic Poem. So many of your works are really beautiful.
Carber Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thank you so very much!
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:15 PM
this is fantastic. I do believe some people can see themselves being called away to the light, and this in turn lights up their countenance.
Carber Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:36 AM
More so than is generally realized, I suspect--thanks Andrea!
Brewer Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 9:06 AM
A touching, convincing and inspiring story told with skill and sensitivity. A brilliant combination of descriptive writing and enlightened sentiment. I am impressed, Len
Carber Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Geoff--I suspect you're like me and not impressed easily-so it means a lot coming from you, my friend!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Wow congrats on your win, this poem is special to me and all those who strongly believe this world isn't it, that there is a better place depending on our actions an afterlife that we all go to come death, that's why the light of the soul shines in dying eyes. Kudos for how you depicted it all so eloquently. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Carber Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 12:35 PM
O yes, this world is more illusion than substance, more dream than reality compared to Eternity...thanks!
Alex Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Oh! Beautiful Eye-Soul!
Carber Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much!
Koplin Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 3:02 PM
Absolutely a wonderful write! I love the message with the stage you have set. Congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Mark, much appreciated!
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Powerful and elegant written with the dignity of the woman in your poem LJ! Congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 2:49 PM
Thanks Sam, I'm glad you liked it--may we all find such grace in our passing...
Seeker Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for taking part in this contest, Carber. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘EMBRACE & RELEASE’. God bless!
Carber Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 2:50 PM
Thanks, and may you go with God always....
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