The Look

I seek the light
                  from your look that
                  i lost at sea
                   of memories...
                  I seek it to clarify
                   the hope of my
                   look, headlight off
                    in the dense gale
                      storms...

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/9/2023 11:06:00 AM

Hello Alakas , I hope you finde the light you seek, You need the light to guide you from the gale. Salute my dear friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/10/2023 11:11:00 AM

Hello Alakas, you are welcome Alakas. I like this poem. I will make it my fav. Salute my dear friend. /Darlene\

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/10/2023 6:04:00 AM

tHANK Very MUCH DEAR, só LUCK that YOU READ AND loved, salute, alkas