The Longing

Thunder echoed across the sky
Then lighting flashes through my eye.
And there I saw her standing by,
wiping tears as she bade goodbye..

Then silence struck the lonely night
Inviting me to hold you tight.
I held you close with all my might,
For in my life you are the light.

It’s been months since you went away,
I miss you every single day. 
Before I lay, to Him I'd pray
That we'd be together someday.

I’ve been to places everywhere,
I've searched the world but you’re not there.
Many months I’ve searched ‘til a year,
Still I couldn't find you my dear.

Then a letter came one morning,
A letter that changed everything.
I fell down while my tears falling
When I knew I’ve lost my darling.

I cried your name out in the rain,
Hoping you’d come and ease the pain. 
Memories filled my heart and brain,
Oh when will I see you again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 23, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Chuck, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 23, 2016 at 7:09 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Chuck - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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