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The Long Night

The air hung heavily depressed by the golden fall of the sugar maples leaves ripe with the sweet smell of Ida Red apples. Rain-washed the breeze blew through the clapboard’s chinks into the closeted rooms of man. Rabbits, raccoons and deer forage amongst the autumn crops of chard and kale. All of creation prepares for the long night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/18/2009 7:01:00 AM
i have often wished i could write about creation as you do it so well. you make me see it. thanks....smile...janetta
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:27:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you Deborah. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:10:00 PM
it's raining outside my window now! and 38 degrees...brrrrr!!!!!!! stanza 1 is my favorite among all of the fine stanza's!...there is an Autumnal-Weight I feel from this poem, quite a fun sensation!
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:49:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to create a mood, Deborah. Especially liked the description of the maple leaves and apples. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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