The Long Life

As we walk along life's long race
And we look at the days we faced disgrace
Finding out when to walk with haste
From those troubles we must escape

Life will often find us sad
Wishing for things we never had
Trusting the one's who drive us mad
Looking for something to make us glad

Searching but never finding gold
Listening but not hearing what we're told
We sometimes find necessity to be bold
Looking for something for both body and soul

The desire to be more than what we are
hasn't escaped anyone not even stars
We must find the solutions not found in bars
And time must be kept to bind up the scars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Winter Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:56 AM
Life is a journey meant to be enjoyed. Every tear and every laughter has its own value. You've written a very thoughtful and brilliant poem. I enjoyed reading your poem dear poet. Best, Anne
Leake Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Nice rhyme John Enjoyed this poetry Best wishes Kevin
George Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Life is never a bed of roses. Through ups and downs as we pass, we have to keep searching for something that will satisfy us and ensure the well being of both body and soul. A beautifully rhyming poem, dear friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 12:12 PM
"The Long Life" is a powerful write. Great Ending...  We never know what life will bring us, both good/bad. Have a blessed day/week writing away..............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 2:57 PM
engaging words that skillfully encapsulate a type of circle of life. well penned.
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