The Long and Winding Trail

Long and winding is the trail
slickened by a slimy snail.
Through life he does wend,
wondering how it will end:

     "If I might beg your pardon,
     little snail in my garden - 
     is your day going well, 
     little creature in a shell?"

          The mollusk replied in fright, 
          "I beg your pardon if I might",
          said the snail whose skin was wet
          with nervous beads of sweat.

          "I'm God's creature just like you",
          said he as he eyed the shoe,
          and, "My, you're looking good,
          glad you're in the neighborhood."

But those words were too late,
for the beast of sluggish gait.
It wasn't how he had wished,
his life stilled by being squished.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 4:52 PM
most clever, David...great rhyme scheme and truly hilarious.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Thanks, Sara!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Hello David Crandall, What happened to the snail? enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Hello David Crandall, Yes David i will read your poem. and comment on it. My thanksgiving Day is next month. on the 10th. My niece and husband are coming for a 4 day visit. From out of town. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Hi Darlene, I feel sorry, because, I think the snail in this poem gets stepped on, and I would like you to read a poem that has a happier ending. I wrote another one yesterday called Sun and Slowpoke. That one comes out better. Have a great evening Darlene :-)
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