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The Lonely Walk

There is silver linings in the clouds today hypnotic breeze makes the trees sway on the pavement of broken dreams she waits eighty years old embracing the fates her treasures of stories have all been told her body tells her she is way too old No one comes to hold her hand No one is left to help her stand Unsteady steps as she crosses the street Cars fly by and she refuses to retreat Her path is determined, no need to fear she wobbles with purpose, the end is near Philosophies fumble through her mind her life plays like a vcr on rewind no regrets, well maybe a few but the road is ending, what could she do crowded streets, life is passing by rushing to the who knows where and why I watch and wonder... Will she make it before the lights change?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/4/2019 12:24:00 PM
Wow this was so amazing! I love it and fav!;)
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Date: 9/5/2019 8:13:00 AM
You will make it across fine. In fact you will stop traffic. On a separate note, I wonder how many younger people will know what a VCR is.
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Date: 11/28/2018 10:55:00 AM
Fine piece, liked it!
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:40:00 PM
Nicely done, Casarah, age is such a rough time to pass. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/9/2018 1:40:00 AM
I see this scene played out often, Casarah. Love the wry last line. Viv x
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Date: 8/26/2018 10:01:00 AM
I would like to think if i were there she'd make it.............I've stopped and venture out in traffic for a turtle, for crying out loud. Beautiful write Cas... maybe it will cause more people to observe and be kind
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Date: 8/25/2018 2:47:00 AM
Love this melancholy tribute, Casarah...your first 2 lines are enchanting...jim
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Date: 8/24/2018 1:24:00 PM
This is metaphorically beautiful and expressive, Casarah. I do not look forward to that long lonely walk, but will not give in that easily:) Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/4/2018 12:57:00 PM
This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. A beautiful acceptance of aging and the natural order of life. A touching and heart felt poem, enhanced by strong vivid imagery. Emile.
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Date: 8/4/2018 9:28:00 AM
You are so good Casarah. I love this piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:07:00 AM
Awesome poem...when we are in our later stages in life there is nothing left to fear. A fav
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