The Lonely Umbrella

The Lonely Umbrella

An umbrella is hung on the edge of the roped bridge of sighs
its color a contrast to the black white  and grey 
In the still of the night there is much to convey
she must act very quickly no time to delay
she did not ply her dreams and desires too well
too many demons to dispel

she stood at the edge staring down at the lake
and murmured a prayer for the ones she will miss
a brief second and then into the watery abyss
a splash lands randomly on the bridge save one drop

The lonely umbrella hangs on the roped bridge of sighs
awaiting no one there is no one to care
dripping down on it slowly is a single drop
or is it a tear

Free verse

Written March 1, 2014 by Ralph Sergi for Visual  number 2

Shown in SYMBOLISM: THE UMBRELLA Poetry Contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Barden Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:49 PM
This is wonderful, Ralph ... so poignant and heart-wrenching, but sadly beautiful in every way. Love the imagery and the phrasing! Going to my favorites! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Sergi Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Thank you, Linda It's a nice feeling to be accepted by lovers of poetry
A   Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Ralph :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, ralph
Sergi Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, SKAT: I always admire the way you encourage all the new poets entering the Soup.
A  Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Hi Ralph , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Hey, I hope this made the winners list. I saw a few of the winners and I must have not seen them all because I see some congrats here for you. I am glad to see someone take a different kind of look at that visual. I think suicide crossed my mind as a possibility for that one as well. Congrats!!
Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:23 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Ralph.
Sergi Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram: Coming from you , I feel more encouraged.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 4:54 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, ralph
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:00 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Ralph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sergi Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Thank you very much, Anne Lise: Or should I say "Tusen Takk".
De Burca Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Excellent work. As stated By Charlotte a great symbol using the umbrella, it fails to shelter the loneliness yet catches the singe tear. Nice deep images captured in your umbrella to. This needs to read a number of times to enjoy it fully and with each read something new appears to mind..
Sergi Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Seosamh: The visual appeared as an eerie scene so I said to myself, Someone left the umbrella there for a purpose.
Puddifoot Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 7:52 PM
the symbolism of the lonely umbrella used to perfection! this would sure score high with me for its originality and emotional content...good luck...
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