The Lonely Army

When wind’s silence 
heralds boundless oblivion
and the trembles of cracked earth
raise the dust of tears
dried by the boundless footfalls
of sallow flesh

When a thread of gold
brings unearthly thought
and the misconception
of suns fallen
drives foolish men to their knees
in unending tremors

An army of one
frees the air from his fingertips
and stays not his opal blade
as it bites the rotted gray necks 
of kings released from their wrongful bliss
by his trembling palms

An army of one
unconstrained by nature’s volume
freed by the sin of his naivety
yet, bound by earth’s oldest secret
as the scarlet sun weeps
its bloodied tears

An army of one
his cloak worn through
by the acid blood of his deception
and his bones stilled; 
the branches of a dying oak
which no longer caress the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/2/2015 11:22:00 PM
AVERY, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2015 4:09:00 PM
Avery I REALLY like this it is very OH 'green' or it could be sci-fi? Who comprises the army of one? Light & Love
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/13/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thanks! It was inspired by a book series called The Stormlight Archive. The Army is one of the antagonists of the series. I absolutely recommend it!
Date: 4/26/2015 7:31:00 PM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:57:00 PM
Avery, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 4/19/2015 2:15:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 4/16/2015 10:49:00 AM
Thanks so much everyone!!!
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:25:00 AM
such intense imagery in this dark write - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:29:00 AM
Two for Two Avery. Congrats again.
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