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The Loneliness of Pain

.... " The Loneliness Of Pain " ..... From the door a crack of light and nothing more , As I lay curled up upon the cold floor , Having no energy at all to get to my feet, A single tear rolls down my cheek,the floor to meet, Chronic pain don't care if you are young or old, It's always there in the heat and the cold , It don't care if you're working, or are poor, If you have lots of friends or none at the front-door , Or if your educated, or can't read or write. It still gonna hit you with all its might , It does not care about the colour of your skin, whether you are tall, short, fat or thin , For pain will never discriminate. It's always there for you to fear and hate , And the world gets smaller every day, When all your emotions get in the way, And you're always trying to run away , For that's better than facing another day , Sick and tired of having to paint on this smile , Just so you can go that extra mile ,...

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Date: 3/19/2016 6:05:00 AM
When the pain is severe, yes, it's just you and that pain. Your words were stark, pinpointing that ache. A 7.
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Jim Smith
Date: 3/19/2016 1:44:00 PM
Dinesen thank you very much for your comments , I just say it as it is and how I feel at that time , take care , and keep writing
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Jim Smith
Date: 3/19/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, I just appreciate that people like it , and that I haven't been corrected for spelling , comers lol take care
Date: 3/14/2016 3:41:00 PM
Such a realistic and honest write Jim, really well penned!
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Jim Smith
Date: 3/15/2016 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, I just appreciate that people like it , and that I haven't been corrected for spelling , comers lol take care
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Jim Smith
Date: 3/15/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Gordon, I just appreciate that people like it , and that I haven't been corrected for spelling , comers lol take care
Date: 3/13/2016 11:41:00 PM
Neat to thank you, just got a email me poem is featured on the home page this week, Find this a great honour, as I class myself as a person of words and for real poets to like it has blown me away thank you
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:28:00 AM
pain--the great leveler.. greeat write, jim..huggs
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Jim Smith
Date: 3/9/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment , I just say it as I feel it ,that or it might be a age thing , take care , keep writting , xx

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