The Lone Tree

Like a lone tree
I am sturdy by myself,
But my leaves still fall like tears for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Quintero Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 6:29 PM
very nice...
Oloidi Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Lovely and heartful! I like ur name; I guess I'll name my unborn daughter, Monique.lol. Keep up d good work!*hugs*
Brandt Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 1:04 AM
Flattered ;) *Mo*
Austin Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Yep! And like that tree, you will see more fine summers, eh? Good stuff, Monique. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brandt Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Yes Daver, many fine more summers! *Mo*
Pettit Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Very pretty little poem for fall.
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 11:04 AM
- You are good. - Welcome you to the P-Soup Monique, hope you will have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Brandt Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:38 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise! *Monique
Haick Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Monique, this isk an Inspiring Monoku... love the analogy. Keep writing and sharing. Love, Annalise
A   Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Monique, some monoku, sad and deep....enjoyed your poem~ have yourself a nice day~ XOX *PD
Grisetti Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:06 AM
A touching poem, so glad you have shared it.
Grisetti Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:07 AM
my maiden name was brandt
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Nice! Perfect choice of words. Thanks for sharing! Take care
Brandt Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Thanks Chris :) *Monique
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