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The Lone Swallow

Whilst the sun goes down A lone swallow honours her As it dips it's wings http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-11.php

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2010 5:38:00 AM

Awesomely creative haiku James, you astound me at times ;) Wilma

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/7/2010 4:52:00 AM

very nice hakiu but you scared me I could just feel this one good one loved it faleshia

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/6/2010 5:55:00 PM

Terrific imagery, James.. Hope all is well.. Peace, Audrey

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/6/2010 4:43:00 PM

Really wonderful haiku..enjoyed it very much..Take care~Deb

Date: 9/6/2010 3:58:00 PM

You paint a picture with words in this one. What a creative perspective. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Skat A

Date: 9/6/2010 2:35:00 PM

ENJOYED JAMES*luv~SKAT