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The Lone Swallow

Whilst the sun goes down A lone swallow honours her As it dips it's wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/8/2010 5:38:00 AM
Awesomely creative haiku James, you astound me at times ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/7/2010 4:52:00 AM
very nice hakiu but you scared me I could just feel this one good one loved it faleshia
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Date: 9/6/2010 5:55:00 PM
Terrific imagery, James.. Hope all is well.. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:43:00 PM
Really wonderful haiku..enjoyed it very much..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:35:00 PM
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