The Lone Swallow

Whilst the sun goes down A lone swallow honours her As it dips it's wings http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-11.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Awesomely creative haiku James, you astound me at times ;) Wilma
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September 7, 2010 at 4:52 AM
very nice hakiu but you scared me I could just feel this one good one loved it faleshia
Haick Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Terrific imagery, James.. Hope all is well.. Peace, Audrey
Wilson Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Really wonderful haiku..enjoyed it very much..Take care~Deb
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September 6, 2010 at 3:58 PM
You paint a picture with words in this one. What a creative perspective. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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September 6, 2010 at 2:35 PM
ENJOYED JAMES*luv~SKAT
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