The Locksmith

My eyes have keys.
My eyes have locks.
My keys don’t fit my locks.

Eyes are made to look out
So, only out I gazed, I sought.

Others’ eyes held their own locks,
A gallery, magnificent and varied.
In those foreign yet familiar clasps, my keys tarried,
Then with a bit of work, they married—

To treasure chests filled with grand memories
To chains tight and binding 
To foggy rooms with dim outlines 
To hope chests crammed with keepsake findings
To storage cabinets and their appliances
To showcases bright with earnings
To boxes of hats, masks, and glasses 
To cages cold with yearnings

Countless lock types I’ve encountered and
Countless locks have crumbled.
But, behind my doors are mysteries
My locks still waiting to tumble.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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March 22, 2026 at 5:22 AM
Great use of metaphors in your poem Robert.. you have a way with words..
Sidwell Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Silent One!
George Avatar
February 6, 2026 at 8:14 PM
Hi Robert, immensely enjoyed this metaphoric poem. The mysteries we hide within are yet to be unlocked. But only when those locks tumble, we can claim that we are transparent in and out. With eyes, we behold the external world, but never dare to look within. Deep and profound.
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February 7, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Very kind, thank you Valsa!
Alex Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:01 PM
"My keys don’t fit my locks." - A compelling imagination.
Sidwell Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 2:56 PM
Thank you!
Nicole Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 6:49 PM
When eyes are opened, the heart in this sense, it becomes easier to understand the emotions within. This is so beautifully written and presented. My best to you, Robert. Hugs, Brandy
Sidwell Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 2:56 PM
Thank you Brandy!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 3:43 PM
loved the lock types as an extended metaphor. Well done, sir.
Sidwell Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Sara!
Kauffman Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 11:31 AM
Robert, you have unlocked a marvelous insight about human relationships and your relationship with yourself with the key of your wonderfully created metaphor. I am entranced by this poem. A fav for me. Thank you for sharing! So glad you led me to it today. Blessings to you.
Sidwell Avatar
February 4, 2026 at 2:58 PM
Thank you Sam!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2026 at 4:31 PM
Wow what a fascinating metaphor. Awesome
Sidwell Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Thanks Andrea!
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