The Live Dream

The Live Dream

The striped carnation adorned my room lately,

Yesterday , your promise replaced them 

with dark red & white carnations,

and 13 roses.

Just when I thought to smell the flowers,

Your words pierce my soul

Jolting me back to life.

Alas, it is still a dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:51 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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