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The Littlest Angel

Taking my gold black tipped pen Words flow on white parchment Like tears intermittent streams. My baby you are in heaven now. Son you're in God's arms, not mine. Looking down at my verse, Before I could comprehend, As if influenced by a spell My paper like wings on wind Gently lifted, flickering in air. I shield my eyes from the sun. A hum heard, as I turned to see My penned words on parchment Laying back on my writing table. Golden flecks dusted my verse. Psst, can you hear me? A tiny angel whispered. For Skat Aces's contest, 'Angels'

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/25/2013 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful, so wonderful. Well deserved win. I know what it is like to listen for the whisper of a tiny angel. Love this one

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/25/2013 6:37:00 PM

Monterey thank you for your heartfelt congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/24/2013 3:48:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/24/2013 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Debbie for the congrats. Warm Smiles, Connie

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/24/2013 12:28:00 AM

Nicely done and beautiful. Congrats Connie. AO

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/24/2013 12:31:00 PM

Yah k you for visiting and leaving a comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

George Zamalea

Date: 6/23/2013 2:24:00 PM

Connie -It's a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on your winner, and that is a high piece. I love it! George

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/24/2013 12:32:00 PM

George thank you for the congratulatory comment. It means a lot to me. Warm Smiles, Connie

Betty Bateson

Date: 6/23/2013 6:49:00 AM

How beautiful! Lovely

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/24/2013 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Betty for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2013 10:14:00 PM

Connie. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/24/2013 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Skat for the wonderful congratulation. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A

Date: 2/25/2013 7:12:00 PM

Connie' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2013 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Skat for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 AM

This is beautiful Connie, so touching Congratulations xx

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2013 4:18:00 AM

Mandy thank you for your lovely comment and the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones

Date: 2/19/2013 8:25:00 PM

Angelic....congratulations

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2013 4:19:00 AM

Thank you Donna for your lovely comment and the congrats. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2013 8:21:00 PM

congrats on your win with this poignant write Connie

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2013 4:19:00 AM

Joseph thank you for stopping by and for your congrats. Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/19/2013 6:33:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love Always

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/26/2013 4:21:00 AM

Debbie thank you for stopping by and your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2013 4:22:00 PM

Connie, love your winning poem in Michael's "boomerang contest" always & forever :-) LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/19/2013 5:24:00 PM

Thanks for stopping my and for your lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/13/2013 4:19:00 AM

this is so beautiful Connie, so sad, as PD says, more than a poem,, this is personal, when we the reader are brought into your heart , to experience your loving dedication..

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/14/2013 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Harry for your most gracious and beautiful comment. Happy Valentines my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2013 12:29:00 PM

this is absolutely gorgeous and a tender poem of your love, Connie. I just know this contest judge will love it.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/3/2013 2:46:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 6:49:00 PM

xox~ This is more than just a poem.... Thank you for the powerful uplifting feeling... a halo is always watching. xox~LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/28/2013 7:02:00 AM

Thank you PD for your lovely comment. Joel will always be in my heart. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 6:47:00 PM

Hello Connie, I feel sad over your loss. But, somehow I found your poem very comforting. I hold a loss in my heart too.. sadly I hide the pain and never found the time to grieve the proper way. The imagery and the tiny voice in your poem, touched my soul. Your son has a beautiful and handsome name. JOEL ALLEN.... God bless... good luck in the contest.. always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/28/2013 7:00:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I grieved for 7 years, had to move on for my young son and husband. We still talk about him, wondering what he would be like and if my other son and Joel would have been best brother friends.. Just don't want to pass on and leave my only son with not a family. That's my worry

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2013 3:20:00 PM

Wow, this is a wondrously powerful write my friend! I am impressed with the way you have written this poem, brought us into the heart of your write and comforted us with an angel whispering! Most enlightening script Connie, I loved reading this piece this afternoon! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/26/2013 3:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. This is a very personal write. When I started I had no idea where I would go with these words. My son if he would have lived would have been 42. I felt a flutter in my heart then knew how my poem would end. Warm Smiles Always, Connie