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The Little Monster

THE LITTLE MONSTER It can be sweet, or very sour. It can be your friend, or your worst enemy. It lives inside. Free to roam the outside. It smiles big when it gets what it wants. If taken away, on the floor it will stomp. Like a magician with many tricks. It farts. It kicks. When mad it has a very loud yell. My mom dose not let me call it. A demon from hell. It pulls hair, it punches, and it screams. With this little monster, it is best to be on its team. This monster who around others acts like an angel. Is really a beast in disguise. It tricks you with hugs and kisses. It is very clever, very wise. Under the skin the monster hides. So what if it’s my sister from the outside Skat & Son

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Date: 11/17/2016 12:14:00 PM
Haha so fun Skat....congrats on being featured
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Date: 11/17/2016 6:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed the way you led into this little monster, Skat (lol)
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Date: 5/25/2016 11:27:00 PM
Skat, traditional or modern haiku in that contest of yours? Or is either type ok? Just soupmail me really quick, could you? I have it both ways!! Thanks, Andrea
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Date: 10/10/2013 6:57:00 PM
SKAT This is a very cute and silly write. Humorous and funny. Gives the reader a chuckle. Especially readers with a little sister or brother. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:21:00 AM
yes! :-)
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:34:00 AM
I don't have the privillage of a little sister as I am the youngest. but my split personalities give me a run for my money. So in that case I can relate to your poem. Love this one too. It's like going into your mind and seeing what SKAT is like. or what you want us to see. Cool
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:28:00 PM
lmao; love that one we all do.... u said it little monster... gotta love them ; but hate them.....by, belinda
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:30:00 PM
lol.we have something in common, my little sister, Erin.is a monster child.but she's so cute.haha. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:07:00 PM
Funny look at the inside- Smiling
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:05:00 AM
Hi Irma! Very funny and cute Rhyme! Everyone of us could also be a "small" monster sometimes. Nicely written! And thank you for your friendly comments..Wishing you a nice week ahead...Gert
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Date: 3/6/2010 5:42:00 PM
nIce job Irma... I like Daver's comment. haha. Thanks for your comments. Robert
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Date: 3/6/2010 4:32:00 AM
Hey, Irma! You got it from both inside and out. I REALLY like your stuff in spite of a few typos. Now don't get pissed. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:40:00 PM
This was cute!! Very adorable piece! Nice write
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:06:00 PM
hahaha. This is great, Irma!!! I just knew it was some little kid (I was picturing my son at a young age). Hey, why am I crazy to post a peeing poem? Look at some of YOUR stuff. hahahaha. Luv ya,Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2010 2:56:00 PM
Irma .. your precious comments are always so special to me and I am happy my poem The Decision made your day and made u feel better too... HE is the only ONE who can make us feel so LOVED..luv.. your friendship is amazing and welcome to me my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/26/2010 8:39:00 AM
Dear Irma, I laughed when I read your poem, The Little Monster. It reminds me of my kid sister when we were young. Well done! Thank you for your comment on my poem, Black Spirit. I’m glad you liked this strange fantasy. Love, Amy
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:40:00 PM
Sounds like a good movie, already, Irma! Great write, as usual. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/25/2010 6:48:00 PM
I have one of those too Irma.. a wonderful write my friend.. suspenseful and mysterious till the very last line.. enjoyed... thankxx for your special comments on my poetry tonight.. welcome and appreciated always.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/25/2010 5:26:00 PM
aww liked this write... i sometimes question my little sis lol...
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Date: 2/25/2010 2:50:00 PM
Hum? Have you thought of forgiving the little monster? Maybe the little monster would change...U think? Cute poem. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:28:00 PM
And it's not always sisters...it can be sons daughers brothers too...I know from experience....Love your poem...Marty
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:03:00 PM
So your mother lovingly protect this little sister. We all have a little of that monster hiding in us. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:54:00 AM
funny!!
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