Skat A Poet Rhyme

The Little Monster

THE LITTLE MONSTER

It can be sweet, or very sour.
It can be your friend, or your worst enemy.
It lives inside.
Free to roam the outside.
It smiles big when it gets what it wants.
If taken away, on the floor it will stomp.
Like a magician with many tricks.
It farts.
It kicks.
When mad it has a very loud yell.
My mom dose not let me call it.
A demon from hell.
It pulls hair, it punches, and it screams.
With this little monster,
it is best to be on its team.
This monster who around others acts like an angel.
Is really a beast in disguise.
It tricks you with hugs and kisses.	
It is very clever, very wise.
Under the skin the monster hides.
So what if it’s my sister from the outside

           Skat & Son

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Tim Smith November 17, 2016 at 12:14 PM Haha so fun Skat....congrats on being featured

Ralph Sergi November 17, 2016 at 6:19 AM I really enjoyed the way you led into this little monster, Skat (lol)

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2016 at 11:27 PM Skat, traditional or modern haiku in that contest of yours? Or is either type ok? Just soupmail me really quick, could you? I have it both ways!! Thanks, Andrea

Robin Davis October 10, 2013 at 6:57 PM SKAT This is a very cute and silly write. Humorous and funny. Gives the reader a chuckle. Especially readers with a little sister or brother. Nice job Hugs

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 12:21 AM yes! :-)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet October 15, 2010 at 10:34 AM I don't have the privillage of a little sister as I am the youngest. but my split personalities give me a run for my money. So in that case I can relate to your poem. Love this one too. It's like going into your mind and seeing what SKAT is like. or what you want us to see. Cool

Audrey Castaneda April 9, 2010 at 10:28 PM lmao; love that one we all do.... u said it little monster... gotta love them ; but hate them.....by, belinda

Lynette Chachere April 4, 2010 at 8:30 PM lol.we have something in common, my little sister, Erin.is a monster child.but she's so cute.haha. -Always&Forever Lynette

Mitch White March 22, 2010 at 7:07 PM Funny look at the inside- Smiling

Gert W. Knop March 7, 2010 at 6:05 AM Hi Irma! Very funny and cute Rhyme! Everyone of us could also be a "small" monster sometimes. Nicely written! And thank you for your friendly comments..Wishing you a nice week ahead...Gert

Robert A. Dufresne March 6, 2010 at 5:42 PM nIce job Irma... I like Daver's comment. haha. Thanks for your comments. Robert

Daver Austin March 6, 2010 at 4:32 AM Hey, Irma! You got it from both inside and out. I REALLY like your stuff in spite of a few typos. Now don't get pissed. BIG LOVE, daver

Poetically Search Me February 28, 2010 at 9:40 PM This was cute!! Very adorable piece! Nice write

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2010 at 7:06 PM hahaha. This is great, Irma!!! I just knew it was some little kid (I was picturing my son at a young age). Hey, why am I crazy to post a peeing poem? Look at some of YOUR stuff. hahahaha. Luv ya,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2010 at 2:56 PM Irma .. your precious comments are always so special to me and I am happy my poem The Decision made your day and made u feel better too... HE is the only ONE who can make us feel so LOVED..luv.. your friendship is amazing and welcome to me my BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Amy Thompson February 26, 2010 at 8:39 AM Dear Irma, I laughed when I read your poem, The Little Monster. It reminds me of my kid sister when we were young. Well done! Thank you for your comment on my poem, Black Spirit. I’m glad you liked this strange fantasy. Love, Amy

Audrey Haick February 25, 2010 at 9:40 PM Sounds like a good movie, already, Irma! Great write, as usual. Peace, love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 25, 2010 at 6:48 PM I have one of those too Irma.. a wonderful write my friend.. suspenseful and mysterious till the very last line.. enjoyed... thankxx for your special comments on my poetry tonight.. welcome and appreciated always.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Royal Trevino February 25, 2010 at 5:26 PM aww liked this write... i sometimes question my little sis lol...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 25, 2010 at 2:50 PM Hum? Have you thought of forgiving the little monster? Maybe the little monster would change...U think? Cute poem. Smiles, Dane Ann

Marty Owens February 25, 2010 at 1:28 PM And it's not always sisters...it can be sons daughers brothers too...I know from experience....Love your poem...Marty

Sara Kendrick February 25, 2010 at 12:03 PM So your mother lovingly protect this little sister. We all have a little of that monster hiding in us. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Doris Culverhouse February 25, 2010 at 11:54 AM funny!!