The Little Girl :Between Nightmares and Dreams

Everyday she walks  more than a mile,
Through the woods to live her dream for a while.
With friends, to enjoy, to play,
After school, longer her stay.
When she starts towards home, she loses her smile.

She walks on a path she has always known,
Still it seemed a nightmare, all alone.
Though Scared of what would befall,
Went on ahead,after all
She clutched in her hand , a sacred stone.

Clouded skies,everything seems a blur,
But beyond the field is a light, no err.
An end to tonight's worries,
To dream on mom's lap, hurries
Who is at the window, waiting for her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/31/2012 6:00:00 PM
This is the only and most beautiful way of saying "There's no place like home". Congrats on your win, Sadaf!
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations. Well done!
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:45:00 AM
Liked this very much Sadaf. Well done
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Date: 1/30/2012 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Between Nightmares and Dreams" contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations Sadaf!!!Beautifully written.
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Date: 1/20/2012 9:10:00 PM
It kind of reminds me of REd Riding Hood walking thru the scary woods. Let's hope her mama is not the big bad wolf in disguise. I enjoyed this, Sadaf!
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Date: 1/20/2012 11:50:00 AM
Awesome!
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:35:00 AM
Scary. Like it but it is sad x
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