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The Lips My Lips Have Kissed

Summer was here I enjoyed it not
Heat and humidity did not hit the spot
Spring now a different thing_in spring_love
Slightly warm days flashing of color, Dove
Blooms from bulbs_so many shades of green
Upon the trees_renewal of all seen
Fall is almost here banishing summer
Shorter days_cooler nights_welcome color
When winter comes blowing fall asunder
Barren trees_cold days even nights colder
Then the memory of the flavored kiss
Rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Lynette Chachere Date: 9/15/2010 4:13:00 PM spring can be a time where unexpected things happen. or where it begins to dawn. . a wonderful write, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/12/2010 12:22:00 PM A stunning write on changes in seasons Sara, hope your Sunday is a great one, love Wilma Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 9/11/2010 9:42:00 AM In the first half, all is green and hot. In the second half, it's cold and barren. That kiss, I'm thinking because it's "rose flavored", it's a reminder that summer has just passed. It's a nice touch. Enjoyed. Login to Reply

Amber Courter Date: 9/10/2010 10:03:00 PM Lots of detail makes me feel like I was there too good job Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/10/2010 6:23:00 PM PD said you got ate by a dinosaur and it took a real long time...Hehe -I just had to check on you. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/10/2010 5:28:00 PM WONDERFUL SARA~HAVE A NICE ONE~luv`*SKAT Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/10/2010 4:53:00 PM Makes a man want to kiss!!!! beautiful write my sweet poet friend... with much love Michael Login to Reply

Michael Hornschuch Date: 9/10/2010 2:21:00 PM i like the flow through the seasons nice flow in rythmn~michael Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/10/2010 1:56:00 AM Very refreshing and cool Poem taking us from heat and dust of summer to lovely coolness of winter. Great write my friend. I have placed a new poem Ground Zero today and shall be thankful if you can read it today. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Sara Ken. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/9/2010 5:36:00 PM what a cool last line, rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis (excellent rhyme with kiss!) Very nice. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Deb Wilson Date: 9/9/2010 3:02:00 PM I really enjoyed reading this description of all the wondrous seasons..Take care~Deb Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/9/2010 2:33:00 PM Very lovely Sara... luv your title... and the way each season is described... so in reading your blog just now..prayers still being extended to your entire family.... much success with the spinal part of your treatment for pain relief..luv.. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/9/2010 2:23:00 PM I like the tender "kiss" of this piece. So sensitive. Love, Dave Login to Reply

William Kershaw Date: 9/9/2010 1:28:00 PM Sara, Nice. It seems that we always find enjoyment in past pleasures we neglected to appreciate at the time. Love, Will Login to Reply

Chuck Keys Date: 9/9/2010 1:09:00 PM thank you for sharing these special thoughts. i can feel the weather change ..... thanks, chuck Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/9/2010 12:17:00 PM Sweet Sara, enjoyed the memory you shared with us. Have yourself a nice and blessed day,..p.d. Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 9/9/2010 12:07:00 PM A lovely fall picture, I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply