Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

The Lips My Lips Have Kissed

Summer was here I enjoyed it not
Heat and humidity did not hit the spot
Spring now a different thing_in spring_love
Slightly warm days flashing of color, Dove
Blooms from bulbs_so many shades of green
Upon the trees_renewal of all seen
Fall is almost here banishing summer
Shorter days_cooler nights_welcome color
When winter comes blowing fall asunder
Barren trees_cold days even nights colder
Then the memory of the flavored kiss
Rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis

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Lynette Chachere September 15, 2010 at 4:13 PM spring can be a time where unexpected things happen. or where it begins to dawn. . a wonderful write, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels September 12, 2010 at 12:22 PM A stunning write on changes in seasons Sara, hope your Sunday is a great one, love Wilma

Hyle Chu September 11, 2010 at 9:42 AM In the first half, all is green and hot. In the second half, it's cold and barren. That kiss, I'm thinking because it's "rose flavored", it's a reminder that summer has just passed. It's a nice touch. Enjoyed.

Amber Courter September 10, 2010 at 10:03 PM Lots of detail makes me feel like I was there too good job

Doris Culverhouse September 10, 2010 at 6:23 PM PD said you got ate by a dinosaur and it took a real long time...Hehe -I just had to check on you.

Skat A September 10, 2010 at 5:28 PM WONDERFUL SARA~HAVE A NICE ONE~luv`*SKAT

Michael J. Falotico September 10, 2010 at 4:53 PM Makes a man want to kiss!!!! beautiful write my sweet poet friend... with much love Michael

Michael Hornschuch September 10, 2010 at 2:21 PM i like the flow through the seasons nice flow in rythmn~michael

Ravindra K Kapoor September 10, 2010 at 1:56 AM Very refreshing and cool Poem taking us from heat and dust of summer to lovely coolness of winter. Great write my friend. I have placed a new poem Ground Zero today and shall be thankful if you can read it today. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Sara Ken.

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2010 at 5:36 PM what a cool last line, rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis (excellent rhyme with kiss!) Very nice. LUv, Andrea

Deb Wilson September 9, 2010 at 3:02 PM I really enjoyed reading this description of all the wondrous seasons..Take care~Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2010 at 2:33 PM Very lovely Sara... luv your title... and the way each season is described... so in reading your blog just now..prayers still being extended to your entire family.... much success with the spinal part of your treatment for pain relief..luv..

Daver Austin September 9, 2010 at 2:23 PM I like the tender "kiss" of this piece. So sensitive. Love, Dave

William Kershaw September 9, 2010 at 1:28 PM Sara, Nice. It seems that we always find enjoyment in past pleasures we neglected to appreciate at the time. Love, Will

Chuck Keys September 9, 2010 at 1:09 PM thank you for sharing these special thoughts. i can feel the weather change ..... thanks, chuck

Poet Destroyer A September 9, 2010 at 12:17 PM Sweet Sara, enjoyed the memory you shared with us. Have yourself a nice and blessed day,..p.d.

Caryl Muzzey September 9, 2010 at 12:07 PM A lovely fall picture, I enjoyed the read. Caryl