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The Lips My Lips Have Kissed

Summer was here I enjoyed it not Heat and humidity did not hit the spot Spring now a different thing_in spring_love Slightly warm days flashing of color, Dove Blooms from bulbs_so many shades of green Upon the trees_renewal of all seen Fall is almost here banishing summer Shorter days_cooler nights_welcome color When winter comes blowing fall asunder Barren trees_cold days even nights colder Then the memory of the flavored kiss Rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/15/2010 4:13:00 PM

spring can be a time where unexpected things happen. or where it begins to dawn. . a wonderful write, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/12/2010 12:22:00 PM

A stunning write on changes in seasons Sara, hope your Sunday is a great one, love Wilma

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 9:42:00 AM

In the first half, all is green and hot. In the second half, it's cold and barren. That kiss, I'm thinking because it's "rose flavored", it's a reminder that summer has just passed. It's a nice touch. Enjoyed.

Amber Courter

Date: 9/10/2010 10:03:00 PM

Lots of detail makes me feel like I was there too good job

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/10/2010 6:23:00 PM

PD said you got ate by a dinosaur and it took a real long time...Hehe -I just had to check on you.

Skat A

Date: 9/10/2010 5:28:00 PM

WONDERFUL SARA~HAVE A NICE ONE~luv`*SKAT

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/10/2010 4:53:00 PM

Makes a man want to kiss!!!! beautiful write my sweet poet friend... with much love Michael

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 9/10/2010 2:21:00 PM

i like the flow through the seasons nice flow in rythmn~michael

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/10/2010 1:56:00 AM

Very refreshing and cool Poem taking us from heat and dust of summer to lovely coolness of winter. Great write my friend. I have placed a new poem Ground Zero today and shall be thankful if you can read it today. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra....Sara Ken.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2010 5:36:00 PM

what a cool last line, rose flavored kiss under the rose trellis (excellent rhyme with kiss!) Very nice. LUv, Andrea

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/9/2010 3:02:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this description of all the wondrous seasons..Take care~Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2010 2:33:00 PM

Very lovely Sara... luv your title... and the way each season is described... so in reading your blog just now..prayers still being extended to your entire family.... much success with the spinal part of your treatment for pain relief..luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 9/9/2010 2:23:00 PM

I like the tender "kiss" of this piece. So sensitive. Love, Dave

William Kershaw

Date: 9/9/2010 1:28:00 PM

Sara, Nice. It seems that we always find enjoyment in past pleasures we neglected to appreciate at the time. Love, Will