The Lion

I didn't want to play this game If the rain in the sky was dry Would everything be the same? I'm whole in a hole with my mane If the rain in the sky was dry a sad lion lost in shame I'm whole in a hole with my mane With no one to hunt or blame a sad lion lost in shame would everything be the same? with no one to hunt or blame I didn't want to play this game.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2010 11:04:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mercedes. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 4:45:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on the Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv and a Happy Thanksgiving...