The Lion

A season of cold

   White snowflakes cover the ground

      Winter's lion roars






   Season: Winter

imaginationnatureseasonssenryu

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Adeleke Adeite

June 23, 2010 at 11:23 AM

This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~

Iolanda Scripca

June 21, 2010 at 5:49 PM

Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Marycile Beer

June 21, 2010 at 4:07 PM

I have met a few of those lions in my day, Danial. I must not fear them to much as I still live with them during the WINTER. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daniel. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2010 at 6:23 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Daniel. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 21, 2010 at 2:42 AM

Hi Dan :) Really liked the contrast of your second line to your last line here--congrats on your 7th place win :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2010 at 5:10 PM

Cool image of the lion in winter! congratulations!

June 19, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2010 at 9:04 PM

Congrats Dan on your success in my contest with this wonderful write and entry... also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"