The Line I Drew

The line I drew
becoming shorter
and shorter
as I become older
and older.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 12:26 AM
Wow. Way back here I found a gem
Maramba Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 10:27 PM
We get to that as we grow older and older. Thanks
Rigoler Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 1:24 PM
This is a fact of life, friend, and requires honesty and courage to admit it. Congratulatons! Best to you in your writing endeavors./M
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Well done, Akham.
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