The Line

The first line my father drew
And all my freedom threw
No going out after eight
Or there’ll be a lock on the gate
My teacher drew the second line
Bunking college is not fine
Algebra and geometry are a must
Do not let your books go to dust
The third line was drawn by my hubby
Who thought I was very chubby
A diet I must go on
And sip lemon juice on the lawn
Line number four was drawn by me
I felt no right to be free
Free to pursue my dream
Of making chocolate and cream
And then it dawned on me
That my life cannot be
Drawn around these lines
And am free to taste life’s wines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/21/2010 9:13:00 PM
Tahera I was rushed this morning and came back to read this more slowly. Where you talk bout making chocolate and cream, were you able to pursue this dream? What do you mean, like candy making?? I really do like this. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:57:00 PM
What a great approach to this contest. Good entry! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:23:00 PM
The opening verses were quite witty, Tahera, but I think you made a poignant message in the end. I for one will not be boxed in by a series of lines, no matter who draws them. Very nice!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/20/2010 1:16:00 PM
Very creative and simple of the drawing of lines - quite realistic, Tahera
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:28:00 AM
What an excellent piece Tahera.. such a great entry for Paula's contest.. I am still working on mine... good luck sweet friend and enjoyed your perfect piece .... have a happy day luv..
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