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Based, in part, on the 1964 movie "The Incredible Mr. Limpet," starring Don Knotts

The Limpetfish

The milquetoast Henry Limpet looks
		through horn-rimmed glasses at the books 
		and four dull office walls each day.
		He dreams someday he'll get away.

		The sailor's life to Henry seems
		the stuff of grand and noble dreams.
		Attempts to join the Navy fail.
		He faces facts; his ship won't sail.

		Denial of his fondest hopes
		confound his mind. He walks and mopes
		for many hours--then suddenly
		before him lies a deep-blue sea.

		He knows about the oceans. How
		can this one be before him now?
		Confused by this discovery,
		he falls into this strange new sea.

		He doesn't drown as you might think.
		He transforms before you could blink
		your eyes, and now the Limpetfish
		will have great deeds to accomplish.

		The townsfish soon become aware
		this new one's special and declare
		they've never seen so smart a fish.
		To make him Emperor's their wish.

		He wears a crown in this new world,
		a splendid one that's gemmed and pearled.
		When asked to name their kingdom, he
		says, "Limpet World the name shall be."
           
		His former life's a memory
		dimmed by the grandeur of this sea.
                The gaping void has now been filled;
		his constant need for meaning, stilled.

199 words


posted 11-26-15

March 25, 2018, entered in Deborah Guenther Beachboard's Fantasy Poetry Contest      placed 3rd

September 8, 2019, entered in Caren Krutsinger's Your Choice 333 Words Maximum Contest
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Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. Interesting and intriguing poem.
Canerdy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so much, Susan! Janice
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April 1, 2018 at 4:48 PM
This poem took me right back to my younger self watching this movie. It also serves to remind t hat fantasy can be a more compelling reality than real life!
Canerdy Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Thank you for placing my poem and for sponsoring the contest, Deborah. Janice
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April 6, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Janice, Congrats on your "New Species win." LINDA
Canerdy Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Linda. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:02 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb write Janice..
Canerdy Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so much, Upma! Janice
May Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:28 PM
I remember the movie with Don Knots...Great write Janice...best wishes
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 1:48 PM
I'm glad you like it, Joseph! Janice
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