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The Lights

Oh, how cold you are, heavenly lights! But there are the earthly lights that promise weary travelers a rest. Interrupting for a moment the eternal movement from dark to light, we stretch out cold fingers to a fire and look up. The Universe gets cold, galaxies flee, supernovae explode and turn into interstellar ghosts, stars fall and their long-long tails as the portents of our coming wanderings, measure the distances of empty spaces. Oh, how hot a sip of coffee is! How sweet is a random kiss in the dark! get some rest and go to where cold heavenly lights eternally shine 14.08.2019 Shooting Stars Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 9/9/2019 12:06:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on your win! As you know I loved and faved this poem which I would have placed as a top winner. xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 11:17:00 PM
Your imagination enchants my imagination, Kurt. How sweet is a random kiss in the dark! What poetic magic you create. Exquisite unfolding poetry. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/14/2019 9:33:00 PM
They are cold unless you're standing on one. Hope ya win!
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Date: 8/14/2019 8:08:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Kurt. Awesome imagery.
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Date: 8/14/2019 2:43:00 PM
Wow Kurt, your lovely poem enchanted my senses! This will be a winner for sure. It is going into my Faves! I absolutely love it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 12:40:00 PM
Another Russian pentameter turned into English haibun. Good luck, haibun)
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