Kim Rodrigues Poet Tritina

The Lightning Strike

The cherub wrapped in rose - chaste chariot.
A sprightly chain stirs charismatic horse
Across the ages to answer one’s prayers.

A demon with a plot to spare one’s prayers.
Betide the lightning strike, toward chariot,
but for the heretofore of God’s blest horse.

Sole-kick displays golden crescent of horse.
Claptrap scream of demon without a prayer!
Away spurs the audacious chariot.

Behold chariot and horse - answered prayers!

2/19/2019
A Tritina For Messina

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Line Gauthier February 25, 2019 at 4:53 PM Congrats on your win with this energetic poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you, Line!

Jan Allison February 24, 2019 at 4:44 PM beautifully descriptive Kim, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you, Jan!

Charles Messina February 24, 2019 at 4:17 PM Wonderful poem, Kim. so many great entries in this contest and yours is no exception. Very well penned. Charlie :) Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2019 at 4:22 PM Thank you, Charles :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 20, 2019 at 6:02 AM D i v i n e dearest, Kim! Kim Rodrigues February 20, 2019 at 7:30 AM Thanks so much, Demetrios!

Constance La France February 19, 2019 at 3:57 PM Kim, a lovely poem, wonderfully penned ~ Kim Rodrigues February 19, 2019 at 8:31 PM Thank you, Constance!

Nette Onclaud February 19, 2019 at 2:29 PM such a dazzling medieval story in few lines, kim... nice end line!....huggs Kim Rodrigues February 19, 2019 at 2:53 PM Thanks so much, Nette! xx