Seren Roberts Poet Verse

The Lighthouse - Lighthouse Rhopalic Verse Contest

The coastal lighthouses, intervening
in many dangerous undercurrents. 
it's beacon interacts vigorously 
as vessel realigns, manoeuvring
past many obstacles undistinguished 
by any obvious visionary. 
So sailing faultlessly, continuing 
home without treacherous impediments



Penned 19 September 2014 by Seren Roberts

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Nette Onclaud September 29, 2014 at 7:33 AM a well-made piece despite its challenging form, seren..my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats! Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:26 PM Thank you for your encouragement Nette....Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans September 28, 2014 at 6:49 PM Congratulations Seren on your winning well done poem. Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:27 PM Thank you Brenda, was a bit trying to do ....Seren

Mark J. Halliday September 28, 2014 at 12:28 PM I agree with Maurice--yours did flow well. Those 4-syllable end-lines were a pain, but your didn't come across too forced. Seren Roberts September 28, 2014 at 7:55 PM Thank u Mark .....Seren

Maurice Yvonne September 28, 2014 at 11:51 AM I really like yours Seren because it flows so well within the restrictions of the form. One of the few that does. Congratulations on your win. You more then deserved it. Maurice Yvonne September 30, 2014 at 6:48 PM I would never say that to anyone as kind as you. However it is a good line. You made me laugh. Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:28 PM Thanks Maurice,I do try , go on say it, I am very trying ....lol ...Seren

Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 6:31 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan x Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:29 PM Thanks Jan for your comments and congrats ...Seren

Tim Smith September 28, 2014 at 6:25 AM A nice win.Seren...congrats Tim Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:29 PM Ty Tim ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2014 at 6:23 AM Dropping back to congratulate you, Seren Seren Roberts September 30, 2014 at 5:30 PM Ty Ram ....Seren

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2014 at 1:10 PM thanks , seren.. soupie for you.. Seren Roberts September 20, 2014 at 2:27 PM thanks Nette ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2014 at 9:29 AM Your muse nowadays is in full bloom saring us your poetic talent, Seren. you need no good luck in the contest. Seren Roberts September 19, 2014 at 10:34 AM Ram I wish, i struggled with this one...Seren

Maurice Yvonne September 19, 2014 at 9:09 AM Really really really really good. It should rank high in the contest. You are a marvelous poet. Seren Roberts September 19, 2014 at 10:34 AM awww Maurice your so kind, am not so sure if its right....Seren

Jan Allison September 19, 2014 at 8:55 AM wow Seren you have nailed this form! Good luck for the contest will take me ages to write one this good! Hugs jan xx Seren Roberts September 19, 2014 at 10:33 AM Jan I found it a pigs ear to write, not sure if i have done it right even...Seren