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The Light in the Dark

In the hush between midnight and memory,
I drift—untethered, yet bound by the weight
Of an anchor, cold and silent, at my ankle,
Sinking me softly into an ocean of night.
The water is velvet, the darkness complete,
Yet I dream, I wander, I hope—
For above, far above where the moon used to be,
A single light burns, unshaken, remote.
I reach, as if my arms were made of longing,
Straining past shadows, through currents that pull,
Eyes fixed on that distant illumination—
A promise, a beacon, a fragment of soul.
Sometimes I wonder if the night will claim me,
If the anchor’s embrace will become all I know,
But even as I sink, hope floats beside me—
Whispering, “Rise. Let the light make you whole.”
For the light in the dark is the dream I keep chasing,
A shimmer that breaks through the black of the deep,
And though I am heavy with sorrow and waiting,
I reach for the light—and the light reaches me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Correia Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 2:55 PM
This poem gave me chills, I could actually feel myself floating in the dead of night as the sea took me far from the shore, the waves carrying me further and further away...I had to catch my breath, then suddenly the light and I found each other and a warm feeling came over me! This is an amazing poem, I hope it's entered in a contest and wins FIRST PLACE!!! I believe it's that good! Thank you for sharing....
Patterson Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much! Reading your response gave me chills. You captured the exact emotional arc I was hoping to create—that sudden, breathtaking shift from the heavy, suffocating pull of the dark water into the warmth of finding that beacon. ​It means the world to know the imagery resonated with you so deeply and that you felt like you were right there in the waves with the narrator. Thank you for your incredible words and your enthusiastic support!
Haywood Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 4:11 PM
This is a very nice poem, full of imagery, It seems it explores human experience between despair and resilience. It captures the heavy pull of sorrow, depression, or isolation and the guiding nature of meeting hope halfway. - Chris
Patterson Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:03 PM
Thank you so much, Chris! You put it into words so perfectly. Despair and resilience are very much the heart of this piece—navigating that heavy, isolating weight while still holding onto the belief that hope is worth reaching for. I'm so glad the imagery connected with you!
Hind Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Beautiful, and inspiring- best, love your poem
Patterson Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:05 PM
Thank you for loving it.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:55 PM
I love how uplifting and inspirational your poem is. It provides hope - 'a shimmer that breaks through the black of the deep" Outstanding!
Patterson Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:06 PM
Thank you so much! That specific line means a lot to me, and I'm so glad it resonated with you. Knowing that the poem brings a sense of hope and light is the greatest compliment. Thank you for reading and for sharing such wonderful words!
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