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poem submitted to "1503 Oct. Part 2" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, October 7, 2026.

The Light Changes

Outside the corner market,
a chartreuse pharmacy sign
buzzes above rain-dark pavement.
Its color reminds me of leaves
caught midway
between 
staying and 
letting go.

I didn't notice old age arriving.
Not in the mirror.
Not in the slow 
accumulation
of reading glasses, 
prescriptions, and
retirement brochures.

It found me instead
standing at a crosswalk
in a beret cap I once thought 
belonged to old beatniks.

Beside me, 
a delivery cyclist 
waits for the light.

Across the street, 
young faces glow
blue-white 
in restaurant windows.

The city gathers its harvest~
office towers emptying, 
subway grates exhaling, 
headlights filling with dusk.

For a moment,
anxiety returns,
familiar as an address 
I remember by heart.

The traffic signal changes.
Steam rises from the grates.
The crowd moves on.

In a restaurant window, 
a young stranger walks 
beside me.
For a moment, 
we wear the same face.

Then,
dusk keeps his name and 
gives me mine.
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Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 5:55 AM
a sensitive and touching poem, moments of painting, appreciated
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