The Life of a Mouse

THE LIFE OF A MOUSE

Pitter patter, scurry scamper,
Running through the house,
Squeek and screech, a frantic dash,
A tiny little mouse.

Searching for a mosel here,
A little nibble there,
Then hurry back into the nest,
To nestle there with care,

For seven little pinkies,
All lying in a bunch,
Waiting for their mama,
To come back with their lunch.

They must be very quiet,
The people mustn't know,
They share their home with even one,
For then they'd have to go.

Life is hard on little mice,
Home and hearth come hard,
They're prey to everything it seems,
They must stay on their guard.

She didn't see the owl today,
Just made it to door mat,
It's bad enough they have to dodge,
That big, mean, nasty cat;

And yesterday waas almost caught,
Beneath the old wood pile,
A weasel hunting there for food,
Near chased her for a mile;

But Mama's here now little ones,
No need for now to fear,
Just be quiet, snuggle close,
We're safe and warm in here.

                                                  Judy Ball

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/26/2018 7:26:00 PM
Nice poem, enjoyed it.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 9:13:00 PM
aha, and I see you inserted an owl into this one as well!! Cue one, those "seven little pinkies!!"
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 6/23/2011 9:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend for the kind words and great review. "Pinkies" are the proper name for baby mice before they get their hair. Learned that at my local pet store. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/23/2011 2:10:00 PM
I have written a few poems about mice, but this one is very creative and enjoyable, i love all creatures God has made. thank you for your comment on Rain Drops and thankyou for pointing out my typo i will change it when i get time.
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 6/23/2011 2:24:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend for the kind words and great review. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/23/2011 8:39:00 AM
This is such an endearing write on mice, Judy! Oh shucks, you almost made me feel guilty with how I think of mice as vermin-- you sure made them so cute and made me picture of Beatrix Potter's drawings... really enjoyed this one and thank you for your inspiring comments in my angel write :)
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 6/23/2011 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Glad you enjoyed it so much.God Bless, JB
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter