The Life Is

The Life Is …

The Life Is …
When I was young, there was no pain,
The only pain was to complain.
When I was young, I did not care,
Just as long as my love was there.
When I was young, my life was great.
But I was there a bit too late.
A bit too late to know life was,
being young and having no flaws.
A bit too late to celebrate,
What I had then was called my fate.
Now it’s different, weather is cold,
I turned into a man that’s old.
The spring has passed, summer is gone,
Autumn at rest, winter is on.
I am too old and know it’s gone.
It is too dark to hope for dawn.
Now I know that a part of life,
It is old age and lives with strife.
Now I know that my life is not,
The perfect plan when I had thought.
The life is not the silken dress,
Unmarked from flaws, full of success.
My life is just a song I sing,
It is winter chasing the spring.
It is sorrow, it is laughter,
It is hope for morning after.
My life is just a long poem,
Had a young star; none would know him.
The life is just a shooting star,
It is so bright but can’t go far.
Blink your eyes; it’s all be gone,
I played this game like a faceless pawn.
I played so well; somehow, I lost.
You don’t want me to count my cost.
My life is like a field of dream,
Or maybe like a moonlit stream.
My life is like a drop of dew,
Waiting the Sun to say adieu.
My life is like the dew at dawn,
The sun will kiss; it will be gone.
My life is not to be just young,
It is okay to be unsung.
My life is like the morning breeze,
It can bring storms or bring you ease.
You are hoping for one more dream,
That wakes you up in golden gleam.
The life is like a candle’s flame,
It lights up love or burns to blame.
The games are on, and the moves are fast.
I do not know how long they last.
For some, it’s short; for some, it’s long.
Go have more fun; it is not wrong.
Remember now, it might get late,
Go play your move before checkmate.

10/2/2019
Haloo
Note: The painting is called “A reminder”; it’s acrylic on wood.
Note: This style of poetry is called "Masnavi"; it is the spiritual couplets. This particular masnavi consists of eight syllables in each line. Poetrysoup has a great explanation and example of this form of poetry.
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Bangalee Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 3:43 AM
total life is here// wonderful poem
Salehi Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Thank you...
Vdev Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Full of images, metaphors and smooth flowing style. Liked this poem. Again a good poem from you.thanks for sharing
Macfarlane Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:48 AM
I enjoyed your journey through time and the messages within. Excellent poetry. Hugs
Salehi Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:35 PM
You are always welcome... Hop in...
Bocsa Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Wonderful poetry. Maybe some would like better with stanzas, but I like as it was imagined and construed by the author: like a living flower with its root and part of soil, petals and leaves of time and delightful beauty shining in the middle of the day.Also, thanks for visit and taste our ...cake.
Salehi Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, my dear... Masnavi do not have stanzas...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Yes growing old is not for the faint of heart. Still each stage of life comes with its own form of magic. There are still diamonds waiting to be discovered. Being forced to slow down allows you to see them. You are a talented writer and painter. I like the simplicity of your paintings, thanks for sharing.
Salehi Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Thank you for kind words.
Horsman Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Amazing poetry, full of sincerity, and i love the message wrapped within...
Salehi Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thank you, Harry, you're always very kind to me...
Ajmal Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 5:55 PM
This is as good as a poem can be, I absolutely live reading it and this poem is going straight into my favourites, I am actually glad that I come across this poem of yours. Life can be anything, it depends on how you want to shape it, I once read in Macbeth that "life is nothing more than a poor shadow, it is a tale told by an idiot full of sound and fury, symbolizing nothing"but sure it is far from truth, it depends on the observer and you as an observer creates your own conscious reality,
Salehi Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 3:34 AM
Thank you my dear above, eminent, summit... Friend
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:55 AM
"For every thing there is a season, a time for every activity under heaven. A time to be born and a time to die..." (Ecclesiastes 3:1-20
Salehi Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 4:21 PM
“I am the true vine, and my Father is the gardener."
May Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 1:41 PM
An interesting write..life is fleeting..
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:55 AM
"For every thing there is a season, a time for every activity under heaven. A time to be born and a time to die..." (Ecclesiastes 3:1-20
Salehi Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 9:05 PM
Indeed... Thanks a lot...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 12:10 PM
A poem that resonates with me! One of those I aspire to write! Your poetry is genuine and unique.. one of my favourites.. you write your heart and mind artfully! An immense pleasure to read.. amazing painting! Best regards, Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Besma for reading another one of my pieces. You are always a good friend. Thanks again.
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 9:55 AM
I have been captivated by the content of this lovely poem, Pashang. Well done! I also love your painting. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Paul... you are too kind.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Hello Pashang Salehi, this poem is beautifully created. it. have a nice evening my friend.
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:36 PM
My dear Darlene... right back at you... thank you for your visit.
Bocsa Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:58 PM
A shining poetry as your talent used to prove the gentle ineffable of spirit and soul, almost touched by delicate senses of a good fairy with always amazing sense and sensibility.With deep admiration,always...
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thank you my dear Ovidiu... you are too kind.
Raven Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Hi Pashang, a wonderful write and painting. Talent always shines. Time has its ups and downs, now in the autumn of my years I find more downs. Love ever sings in the soul. Excellent write Pashang. I love the content. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Mike, you're always too kind to me ... thank you... Pash
Michael Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Not much different than mine...and probably most people too...It is what it is...Nice write...
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:33 PM
It is what it is... you are right... thank you for your visit.
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 7:19 AM
- A wonderful writing ... and I admire your painting, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Thank you my dear friend...
Duet Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 12:25 AM
Lovely poem and painting, Pashang. You have a lot of talent.
Salehi Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:00 AM
Thank you Carole...
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Pashang. I think this is my favorite of the poems of yours I have read. I am always interested in the theme: winter of our lives. I add to my FAVEs
Salehi Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Murray Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 6:01 PM
I love the painting and the poem.
Murray Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Pashang, only seeing this message now. I am well. I notice on my return to check my list of favourites that some are gone for months and others perhaps for good. So sad what has happened here. I hope you and yours are also well.
Salehi Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Thanks Jean... how are you my dear.
May Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Life goes by so fast..Very nicely penned Pashang..
Salehi Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Thank you...
B. Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 11:44 AM
I absolutely enjoyed your Masterpeice, Pashang.. Wonderful work of art.. Bravo, my friend.. Have a blessed day!
Salehi Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:10 AM
Thank you very much for kind words
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:30 PM
dropping back to re read this gem Pashang, and to say I hope you and your father have a happy Persian New year:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:26 AM
Thanks Jan, you are too kind... always Pashang
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Wonderful work and art Pashang, well done my friend...
Salehi Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:23 AM
Thank you my friend...
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:29 AM
Fantabulous masnavi, Pashang:) love the depth of thought:)
Salehi Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:23 AM
Thank you very much...
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 12:52 PM
a poem truly written from the heart Pashang and Midnight Moonlight is absolutely beautiful:-) adding this gem to my faves, it truly merits many more readings:-) hugs jan xx
Salehi Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Jan, you are so beautiful...
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