The Life

Our cries are their way
Our laughs cause them sad
Are we going to stay?
I think they'll never mind about that

From the night until the day
We still stuck in the same raid
All of the precious ways turn to grey
They have no heart to be laid

While they're enjoying their singings
Our breakfast done at suppers
They may have strength with things
But we're stronger in suffers

But what they got is illusions
Since people have their own portion
By the time they're in our position
Sadly,
There will be no way even for regression
Cos will be too late to ask for remission

Prima Minardi

For 'Monopoly The Game of Life' contest
Sponsored by Judy Konos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/22/2011 8:46:00 AM
unjoyed reading this one a great write. thank you for commenting on Tender Heart.
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:23:00 PM
Prima, this sounds like fun... and your perception gave it illusions that life will pass go.. or come for free.... good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Prima. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:54:00 AM
Lovely expressions with quite a different perspective on the theme, Prima
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