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Glenn Hughes Poetry Contest.   Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

                                       Date: 22nd March 2024

The Liar

"The Liar – Inspired by a song of the same name by Glenn Hughes." The Poet

Verse1:
I see the evil in your eyes,
Only now I begin to realize.
The faith I had in you was false.
You took me on a deceitful mocking waltz.

As in love as I once was.
Stunned by your beauty just because,
I didn’t see through your evil lies.
You have the ability to mesmerize.

Chorus:
I should have known.
You’ve a heart of stone.
Signs were there.
Leading to despair.
You didn’t care.
Now you want me,
I’m not your destiny.
You’re headed for a red-hot pyre
You’re the one they know is the liar.

Verse 2:
Evenings while you lay awake.
No sleep will your evil mind take.
Actively planning ways to hurt.
Plotting to push innocence into the dirt.

You still have a hold on me.
But I have to escape your tyranny.
I’m taking everything I own.
Making sure I let it be known.

Chorus:

Verse3:
Yes I am taking my love as well.
Leaving you to your date with hell.
You’re the one that’s doing all the lying.
Nothing will bring me back not even your crying.

I won’t believe your alibies.
All just a pact - more of your lies.
I won’t even be able to call you a friend.
I should have listened to warnings. This is the end.
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Liguori Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:50 PM
What a strong and emotional poem. My wife left me and I wonder if she had the same sentiments. I miss her dearly. We can only ask for forgiveness and do our best to live a good life. Beautiful poetry. Keep up the excellent work.
Anaya Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 5:16 PM
I heard the video, so I know I left a comment or maybe I didn't post it. Anyhoo I thought it a monumental rendition! An endearing trib.
Volumes Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thanks sweet friend, don't worry about the post. I couldn't count the number of times I have written a comment and left the page without validating it. Wen
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Wow. You did a great job with your song. I hope to find some of this artist's songs I am familiar with. It's on my to -do list. Thanks for your several sweet comments to my recent poems
Volumes Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 4:41 PM
Thanks Andrea. I was a great fan of Deep Purple in the day. I still have some 55 year old vinyl of theirs. The Book of Taliesyn, Deep Purple and Shades of Deep Purple. My boyfriend (Now my husband) had an 8 track player in his car that made me a fan, so each payday I would by an album so I could listen at home. I did the same with Hendrix and Black Sabbath, Moody Blues, Led Zeppelin and many more. While others were spending money on clothes I was investing in good music.
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