The Letter To My Love

it hurts to see the one you love in pain
it seems to me that I lost my heart beat
I cant handle this pain inside
for it is eating me alive 
I cant see her cry
cause then I will die inside
I will fall
and lose it all
my heart will ach 
and sooner or later will break
no point to seeing your pain
because it will give me rage
it hurts and scares me
for all I care about is thee 
the one I die for is you
I wish you knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/20/2013 7:20:00 PM
Dylan, my name is Adam Champion. I would like to feature some of your poetry on a site with full credit given to you and a link back to your poetrysoup site or a personal blog. Please email me - sergeantchampion@gmail.com
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:35:00 AM
welll thanks man
Date: 7/27/2013 6:15:00 AM
What a beautiful pledge of love in a letter.Ofcourse that is love seeing the one we care for happy.
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
yes you are right
Date: 7/22/2013 10:52:00 AM
How beautiful, Dylan...This is very deep and meaningful. Hope you guys are enjoying it there without me.... :( Remember, Auntie is very proud of you! Hugs!
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 8/29/2013 11:36:00 AM
i hope it touched you like it did to me cause it really let my feelings free
Date: 7/22/2013 8:51:00 AM
with love you send, a beautiful write, enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda
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