The Letter I

~Why The Letter I~

Why the letter "I" sometimes feels sad or happy.
If I am downhearted I cannot feel happy.

Why the letters "WE" sometimes feels strong or weak?
If I am cheerless I cannot feel stronger.

Why the letters "YOU" sometimes feels loved or hated.
If I am depressed I cannot feel love.

Why the letters "THEM" sometimes feels aggressive or connected.
If I am sadden I cannot feel aggressive.

Why the letters "OUR" sometimes feels love or possessive.
If I am rejected I cannot feel any love or possessive.I will feel
nothing. 

Why the letters "HIM" sometimes feels sexual or indifferent.
If I am consumed I cannot feel sexual, I will feel indifferent.

Why the letters "SHE" sometimes feels adored or betrayed.
If I am crying I cannot feel adored, I will feel betrayed.

Why the letters "ALL" sometimes feels friendship or abandoned.
If I am unconscious I cannot feel friendly , but will feel abandoned.                               

If I will erase ALL those words 
Will you let me Love You?.
I already Love You.



Therese Bacha
4/5/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Hi Terry, this is so clever, and so poignant too
Bacha Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Hi Harry, hope yo are doing ok. Thank you for passing by. I did not write since a while. Feeling down lately, health wise. See u soon. Terry
Duncan Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 6:21 PM
nicely written Terry ;}
Bacha Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Hi Debbie, glad you liked it. Haven't been on the sight for a long time. You are fine. Love Terry
Chircop Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Just beautiful 'All' is my favourite..Unless someone feels abandoned of that :all:circle..All-sounds so beautiful..lovely thougts penned.Hope you are fine dear..i just returned from our holiday..
Bacha Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Thank you Charmaine, will see you later. Love Terry xoxoox
Oyewole Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 12:51 PM
This is an excellent quill... Thanks for sharing.... Many thanks for the Fav. 5 Thumbs up ma ...AO
Bacha Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 1:06 PM
Thank so much young man, i loved reading it. Terry xo
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May 6, 2013 at 11:09 PM
terry, I agree with Anne down here. This is UNIQUE!! Very clever the way you went through the different pronouns! And what was even cooler, that last stanza. I just love how you ended with "I already love you!"
Bacha Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Hi Andrea, thank so much for passing by me, i am glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxoxo have a great day.
Pettit Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Another good one Therese.
Bacha Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Thank you again so much. Terry xo
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Terry, this is unique! - Love "puzzle game" .... - Very well done. - <3 U my friend!! - If you have time ...... read my "Love Letter" too! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:22 PM
Hi Anne, I already loved the heart picture of your love letter poem, thank you that you are here. I will try to put off the TV......i laugh every time i read it. Love your honesty. Love Terry xoxo
May Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:17 PM
wonderful write Terry.....I like the last stanza..thanks so much for stopping by...
Bacha Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:20 PM
Hi again Joseph, so so happy you liked it, it is so new for me to write this kind of poem. Love Terry xo
Fraser Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 9:27 PM
A very strong message here Terry, love the style, great job, blessings Carl
Bacha Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Thank you Carl, I mean young man, its so nice to have your opinion, because i am new in those kinds of short poetry. Have a great Sunday. God Bless. Love Terry xoxo
Sivey Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 8:19 PM
This is quite the unique and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed this delightful poem, Therese! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Bacha Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Thank you Russell, I am so glad you liked it, good night have a great day. Love Terry xoxo
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