The Situation Poet Personification

The Letter

i keep holding on that letter she wrote
i can't believe that is the last final note
with solomn saddness each line is read
and constant questians fill my head
why did i love her and lead her on
she was'nt fooled by the love i'd shown
and my alter ego has been left alone
no one really to call his own
with this a history has been made
an alter ego with a failing grade

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Halie Doland August 28, 2012 at 9:33 PM i like this poem, it really gets me thinking. loved the way it was set up. thank you for posting it. -Halie lol

Christopher Flaherty February 11, 2012 at 6:21 PM Its a hell of situation feels like looking at myself in the mirror and the cost of feigning caring. My favorite poem this evening . Cheers The Situation February 11, 2012 at 6:26 PM thank you for reading but i would'nt call it feigning. just to many eggs in one basket with one golden egg. thats all.

Debra Squyres January 12, 2012 at 5:19 PM awweee..so sad.

Black Eyed Susan January 2, 2012 at 1:44 PM reflective poem. I'm a little confused about how you refer to your alter ego - is that another personality, the jerk side of you, or do you mean the you before the time of the letter? to distinguish between the regretful you now? I would love to know what you meant when you wrote it. The Situation May 30, 2012 at 6:58 AM Exactly what it said. Every line true. Alter ego, Situation.

John Loving Iii August 8, 2011 at 8:13 PM a sentimentle heart. jhl

Phyllis Babcock July 1, 2011 at 10:51 AM A sad poem you have posted. A failing grade yes, but still sad all the same. Thank you for your comments and yes I spent my teenage years in the 60's and what a great time it was. love phyl

Charlotte Puddifoot June 28, 2011 at 4:54 PM a sad and reflective little poem, thanks for commenting on my senryu...

Cory Long June 7, 2011 at 9:15 AM Thanks for your comments I ask myself that very question every day which is why I am the only one I can trust, I am the only one who will be there in the end. cory

Carolyn Devonshire June 7, 2011 at 8:58 AM So sad, T.S. There are many of us who live alone and feel the regrets. I have had that feeling of failure lately as well; it comes from the loneliness. Still trying to figure out why I can't seem to find a nice man who accepts me as I am. Saw your comment on Cory's poem about her mother. Totally agree with what you said. One day, she will have regrets. Best wishes, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown June 2, 2011 at 10:18 AM Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them T.S. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Cory Long June 1, 2011 at 4:38 PM this was so sweet. nice job cory