The Lesson of Your Clock




The brass hands of the clock, turn without
any effort around.


It just gets the job done, yet makes nary a
single sound.


It functions which indubitable grace and 
ballet-movement ease.


For you see my friends, the fortunate clock, 
does not exist to please!



                               
                                9/14/2022
                                    ~1~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 9/18/2022 6:32:00 AM
Nice analogy, Panagiota. Sometimes a person needs to do the right thing, just because it's the right thing to do. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
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Date: 9/15/2022 6:45:00 PM
I guess this makes 'time' an existential crisis -- since everything is 'a crisis' these days. Smiles, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2022 10:30:00 PM
Heh-heh, Gershon! It seems that way! What do I know? I don’t like censorship, passionately! Raids on homes, cell phones being taken. STUIPIDO because, you do not need THE cell phone itself at all. Just a way our Nazi government operates raids…leg irons…cell phones…and worst of all phones-baloney propoganda. Every American, regardless of party, deserves truth! We are not pigs to be fed sloppy lies. Love you, The Pangie xx
Date: 9/15/2022 8:32:00 AM
Oh I like this! “ballet-movement ease” — you have transformed my clunky old clock into a graceful dancer with your poetic pen. Lovely write dear poet :) ps
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2022 11:47:00 AM
Hello PS. Good heavens! I am so glad your clock is now a ballerina! So is mine… they an do a ballet to that song..”Autumn Leaves?”together! I can hear the applause now.. and….thank you for sharing! Pangie xx
Date: 9/15/2022 7:20:00 AM
This poem was so creative and enjoyable. Very well done.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2022 11:40:00 AM
Yo, Elena~ so glad you like it! Thank you! Pangie xx
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