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The Length of a Swore

Do You ever just get tired of Being You? Up there on The Highest of pedestals as You rule... Is It You feeling selfish or alone as an unhinged fool? I care of Your most inner thoughts and about You often... May My remarks make Your Strength become more soften. Do You ever get tired of Being You? Even with All Your Money or possibly Self for filled greed... I can't help You understand for I only have Me to need. I hope I can Be of Your Beckoned Service when You actually want to See. For as I share this marking wound of Your deepest fear I hide inside Me. Do You ever just get tired of Being You? The Children captured in Their different varieties of worlds holding pain... Wondering if Their Next Meal or life matters that may or will ever Be obtained. I'm just trying to hit Our common grounds to Our Survival... We are just mismatched in A Huge Puzzle yet unsolved as We form rivals. Do You ever just get tired of Being You? As The Richest of People plummet into cesspool of remorse over My thoughts... There Doors locked for discussion as Wars are created from the shadows taught. Do You ever just get tire of being You? The Length of A swore is vast,thicken with Evil Doers,and blood drenches are filled. The firmness In My Words silenced;I have spoken from My small mind as willed. All left for concern of Me;is silent,disheartening,as Your sunsets go on for now... All is red and done;Seemly to reflect empty words dusted underneath A sad Brow.

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Date: 9/24/2014 8:47:00 AM
An insightful poem my friend. You did quite well and the message is a great one. Bravo on such a fine, heartfelt write!!!!
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/24/2014 1:59:00 PM
I am trying... I also ty For the wonderful comment it was very inspiring...
Date: 9/24/2014 3:23:00 AM
- I do not think I've read some of your work - but, really glad that I read this - Enjoy reading your poem, Charlene :) - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/24/2014 2:01:00 PM
I glad You liked My Work...All the comments are inspiring to write once more and I TY! Very nice comment Friend...
Date: 9/23/2014 8:58:00 PM
Charlene, I wish I had more time to read, all your poems. Soon, I will have the time, as you read my poems. I'm in the biggest heartbreak of my life. It's hard to move on, but I am trying. Thank you, for the wonderful reply. Love Linda
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/23/2014 9:26:00 PM
Friend if You would like comfortable conversation and talk.Find Me at facebook underneath Charlene L.Wilcox..Look for the link in the Purple lavender sweater..Just let Me know..Hugs
Date: 9/23/2014 5:12:00 PM
Charlene, that is reality, and I enjoyed this part of the poem the most, "marking wound off Your deepest fear I hide inside Me" I know people and politicians who swear things up and down, and at the end,--- It's exactly how you end your poem. ----reflect empty words dusted underneath------- Enjoyed...LINDA
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/23/2014 7:49:00 PM
Oh My Goodness...This is like so much of an honor to have The Poet of the week love My Poetry...Thank You for the privilege and the comment it is awesome and I appreciate it immensely .Linda I just love You,Hugs...I too enjoyed this Sister..
Date: 9/20/2014 9:36:00 PM
Charlene another great piece, you will get used to the posting, I had trouble at first but don't let it get in the way of your writing, Take care my friend........Vera.........
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/20/2014 10:43:00 PM
Vera I had to crack up laughing over it ...It was too funny and I truly didn't understand how I managed the blunder at first.You and Your Husband are so nice ty for Your help and understanding Your New friend-Char...It's a lot easier to type Char and All My friends call me Char,I hope that easier for You friend...
Date: 9/20/2014 8:20:00 PM
Greatness is only measured in an enriched cowards Dreams...May Our weakness Peter Duggan Be the strength We offer as We sit back watching A very sad fallen World unraveling before Our Eyes...It is very sad but truthful,,,Thank You for a comment that verifies I am normal to be filled with Eternal joy as well friend.Sometime as I stop to watch the News and All of it's insanity I want to think life is an illusion and Heaven is The end Reality...
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/20/2014 8:22:00 PM
That is too funny,lol! I did not know I could post My Own Poetry...I'm not even certain how I managed to do that???

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