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Premiere Contest WinnerThe Learner Journey - First Place Contest Winner

1st Place Contest Winner

A learner journey is never done, For there are always needs to be won. And the learner needs to repeat the lesson But the soul of the learner always questions. Learners wish success in the avid span of insight. Reaching for stars, they let curiosity flow delight. I feared taking my first step, but I had to prepare. I fell, yet I rose to protect my image and bear. With every stage, I improved my score. My expertise and skills started to soar. I met some pals and learned from each other. And finally, I became a teacher and discover. It's not always obvious to understand. It may be swirls and turns beyond command. I'm still learning, even as I reach incredibly high Through wins and trials, that illuminates the sky. Written: June 09, 2023 Phrases Used: 1. And the learner needs to repeat the lesson 6. that illuminates the sky Random Phrases Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley
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Drowley Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. Keep illuminating the sky...and the page.
Agustin Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing your wisdom-filled muse. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations, I am so. happy for winners. Keep up the good work.
Dutta Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:08 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. First stanza is unique.
Bueckert Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Soul of a learner always questions, great line and so true, if we never question we never learn, congrats and well done
Hawley Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:25 PM
You take top place for a message I can agree with. I liked how you kept my word "learner" and never changed it to student. I also like the fact that in your poem a learner could be literally anyone of any age, and not just someone of school age. Congrats on your win.
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much for hosting such a great contest. I really appreciate your reading, placing, and commenting on my poem. BLESSINGS TO YOU
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