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The Leap

A blaze of silver breached the surface, Muscle flexed, sinew taut. Through the raging waterfall, Upwards struggled, strived and fought. Her mighty tail thrusting, driving Instinct pushing, nearly spent. A heroic leap, she jumped again ! Over the waterfall, the salmon went. Entry for poetry contest 248 Any topic, max 8 lines. 13/12/2016

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Date: 1/5/2017 8:38:00 AM
A marvellous little poem, Gary - Heroic and noble! Tennyson would have nodded his esteemed head approvingly. All the very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/5/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you John, and all the best to you :)
Date: 12/28/2016 8:14:00 AM
Bold and wonderful! (: Nature and its creatures sure have its moments of bravery and victory. Good job~ ^-^ a 7 of course! -JWE
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Date: 12/29/2016 6:39:00 AM
Thank you JW :)
Date: 12/16/2016 12:13:00 AM
Cheers, Gary - a great look into the self of another being.
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/16/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Doug :)
Date: 12/15/2016 8:31:00 PM
Hi Gary, Congratulations on your win;-) Alexis
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/16/2016 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 12/15/2016 7:36:00 PM
A 7 for your highly descriptive WINNING poem, Gary! Janice
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Date: 12/16/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Janice :)
Date: 12/15/2016 6:58:00 AM
I love this image, Gary, so vividly described and chuckled at the end. Congrats!
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 12/13/2016 6:39:00 PM
I found myself really pulling for that fish! Nice!
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 1:49:00 AM
Thank you SW :)
Date: 12/13/2016 5:17:00 PM
Wow , nice one Gary. Neat!
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/13/2016 5:19:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 12/13/2016 4:55:00 PM
Everything about nature is beautiful and now that includes your poem Gary. Such a beautiful piece.
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/13/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Chris :)

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