The Leader Bunny

All the little bunnies were lined up for a race. Why, you may ask?
Because the dear old Leader Bunny was stepping down with grace.
He had led the others for years without disgrace, in all pursuits.
He was their advisor, friend, and confidant... solver of disputes.
Such a lofty position was dearly sought by all…from all around.
But he could pick only one to wear that lofty, wonderful crown.
So a race was determined to quickly resolve, the question therein.
And a lovely little laurel crown was offered, to the one who did win.

Now many strategies to win emerged from within the race.
The most common was the notion to set the fastest pace…
A few would use tricks that might hurt, in order to slow others down.
A few were mean, for they wanted the power that comes with the crown.
Two were clever and would catapult each other at the very end.
A few just practiced running to gain the added stamina needed to win.
Only one little rabbit found shoes for the poor, for it was a rocky trail.
And when the race began he helped those hurt in the prevail.

Now the dear old leader had never actually worn a laurel crown.
His had been symbolic; his works had brought him his renown.
When the Leader Bunny gave the laurel crown to he who won the race…
Only a few were surprised, when the little helper won the Leader’s grace…
Though some would go on to complain because he had come in last…
It truly takes someone who knows how to serve, to lead and guide the rest.
But my moral to this story is that…. Regardless what some may think…
It takes compassion to correctly lead…and sometimes the last can be the best…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 30, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Carol, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:22 PM
So true. Some of us live to learn, and learn to live more consciously, compassionately...
Duncan Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 12:21 AM
Awesome write, congrats on the win. I read this to my 7 yr old granddaughter. She knew the helpful bunny would win, Like her donkey store. He got to carry baby Jesus, because everyone thought he had the best temperament, to carry the baby :)
Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 8:00 AM
such a good write! Congrad's on your win!
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "The Contest Contest" Carol E. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 10:15 AM
enchanting last line to cap this racy theme, carol.. congrats on your win... :) huggs!
Williams Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Carol congrats on your win..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:21 AM
A wonderful win CarolI loved this when I first read it, that last line is terrific, it rounds it brilliantly xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 8:01 PM
cute one, Carol. Big congrats to you.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:17 AM
Carol, congrats on your bunny win! Rhonda :)
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:17 PM
CAROL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:57 AM
Carol, wonderful couplets. Congrats on winning Carol B's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations a delightful bunny tail xx
Onclaud Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 9:50 PM
graet story... another super delight of a poem from you, carol, and all… applause for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
Johnson Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 5:27 PM
great little moral here i see, not best but carer it should be, well done and thoughtful, be yes ye, deserving winners crest!
Guzzi Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:17 PM
Excellent moral to this Bunny Tail! Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 10:16 AM
congrats CXarol on a fantastico win for this wonderful creative piece on bunnies luv.. so happy u are entering contests frequently now... and winning tooo....
Richards Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 8:23 AM
What a wonderful lesson in your amazing story, Carol! Congratulation on your fabulous poem, so well deserved!
Brown Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Carol. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 8:30 AM
This is so awesome, Carol, the poem in itself an entertaining read, but the message here is so profound and meaningful. Such an intelligent poem this is. Good luck. harry
Xiao Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 8:45 AM
wonderful, wonderful poem. i love how you worded your story. this is the type of poem that draws people in. :)
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Thank you for supporting my Bunny Rabbit contest Carol. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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