The Lawn

I grew up in a house that had a huge green lawn in the backyard.
It ended at the edge of a steep hill. When I stood on it, I felt suspended
as if I was floating just above the small town below.

I remember basking in the sun on this soft, pampered suburban lawn--
hot summer afternoons made it too hot to move, no breeze, and
lizards scurrying by to break the silence, interrupt daydreams.

As I think back to being eye-level in that green blade jungle; 
I think of all the feet that have crossed there. 
Bare feet and boots, high-heels and the delicate hooves of deer--
All the memories that have walked away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lewis Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Very nice write. Great last line.
Docherty Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 7:22 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner in Johns contest, a lovely written piece...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Winter Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your most excellent win in John's contest! Love, Shar
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Ooh! Very nice writing. It has a beautiful flow. I love the parts about "half-baked dreams and memories that have walked off." Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup.
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