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The Laughter of Children

one, two, and three swings 
higher, higher reach the sky
blossoms worn away

Teenage dreams of love and romance my life I had just begun
When sweet peace holds my breast, Jessie three, James two, and Mason one.

2/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/14/2019 3:24:00 AM
Inspirational poem which comes at time when we need to count the blessings children bring us instead of considering them an inconvenience or playthings to use how we will, My book Suffer the little Children examines this. Think I said I was an early childhood teacher For 30 years. Book is in LA book fair this year. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/12/2019 3:52:00 PM
Eve, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win ~
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Date: 3/7/2019 1:55:00 PM
I'm pleased that my winning forecast came true, Eve:) A pleasure to be back with congratulations! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/7/2019 12:51:00 PM
Hi Eve, Stopping by with congrats - be blessed. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/7/2019 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work. Way to go. Those little ones were a challenge in themselves alone. It is not easy looking after and caring for the needs of three little ones like that. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/7/2019 4:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) -
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Date: 3/6/2019 3:04:00 PM
For me this was higher than how it placed. Congrats on the winner list.
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:53:00 PM
Wonderful, Eve. Congratulations on your win. Charlie
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:53:00 PM
This holds so much feeling of love for your children. Precious one, Eve.
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:46:00 AM
How beautiful Eve, children's voices and the pitter patter of their feet is music to our ears! Your love for children shines within and your poetic words seal this love! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/4/2019 11:55:00 PM
There is no greater joy, in my opinion, than hearing the happy laughter of children Eve. Beautiful! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/2/2019 12:24:00 PM
You did this very well Eve...
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Date: 3/1/2019 5:24:00 PM
the sound of happy children does enchant... splendid artwords mark this engaging work , eve..love how you did the birth order...huggs
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Date: 3/1/2019 9:46:00 AM
Your take on this contest's requirements is very good, Eve. I expect to see it on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/1/2019 6:02:00 AM
Your words are so revealing. Your heart begets the love through memory and affection I have no doubt. Thank you for your pen today, Love you xo
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Date: 3/1/2019 4:03:00 AM
I have ADHD so I must ask...do you really have Jesse James in your family? I am loving this one for sure! And the possibility. Wow! And, next question. Are you from Missouri by any chance?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 5:13:00 AM
This poem is so well done, and has my imagination going in six directions. Well done my friend! Well done!
Date: 3/1/2019 2:37:00 AM
- Lovely written, dear Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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