Casarah Nance Poet Rhyme

The Last Words

We have come this far,
In this forever, here we are,
a speck of sand, a blink
vulnerable as we think
we are not a never,
nor are we a forever.

Time will claim the choice,
silence the loudest voice,
All the whispers ever heard
will go mute in deathly word.
Vision seeds go unplanted,
timbers fall warped and slanted.
Moments shiver and sieze
with the dying of the breeze.

We find our home inside
the womb of the natures bride
waiting to be reborn
left behind lovers mourn.

Finality is a fragile thought
some fear, some sought,
and it is my turn for goodbye.
Time comes and we all die.

For contest: my muse, mortal
Date: 6/21/18

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Jeanne Mcgee October 18, 2019 at 9:02 AM Here's another fav for me. You have found such meaning in few words and rhyme. Wonderfully done again Cas.

Susan Gentry August 23, 2018 at 3:50 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done! An exceptional poem.

Connie Marcum Wong August 21, 2018 at 5:37 PM Beautifully composed Casarah! "Finality is a fragile thought some fear, some sought," I can identify completely with these lines! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Gregory Richard Barden August 21, 2018 at 3:04 AM This was one of the first poems I read, Casarah, and I knew it would place highly and stay there ... you have an unusual style and took a bit different tack, one I just adore, and your phrasing and imagery is exquisite, joined with a fresh and articulate word economy that I so admire! (You also see the world and life much as I do). This is a superb poem - you have a singular talent! Congratulations on your THIRD PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Virginia Waters August 21, 2018 at 1:35 AM congratulations on win-like the womb of nature's bride line.

Louis Spence July 13, 2018 at 1:12 PM You kindly commented on my poem Mister Blues, saying it read like a song. It is just that and will be on YouTube shortly. Many of my poems are songs I have recorded. I like some of your work very much. Thanks for taking the time out to comment. Louis Spence

Tim Parry July 11, 2018 at 2:39 AM A very good write that poses the age old question about our own mortality had me absolutely spell bound Tim

Viv Wigley June 24, 2018 at 12:53 AM Indeed, life embraces death, as it must. You can't love the pizza and hate the crust. Viv x Casarah Nance June 24, 2018 at 2:48 PM mmm pizza....

Robert Lindley June 23, 2018 at 10:34 AM You my great friend have awed me with this definitely top class poetry! This the kind of gem one stands back in profound appreciation and astonishment when found! Definitely should be published! A fav.. a truly great fav.. Casarah Nance June 24, 2018 at 2:48 PM Thank you I appreciate that!

Arthur Vaso June 23, 2018 at 2:06 AM Ahhhh, finally, I melt in the heat of your warm heated words, and so glad you are back!!!!!!! Hugs!!!!! Casarah Nance June 24, 2018 at 2:48 PM hugs!!

Lyric Man June 22, 2018 at 7:52 AM Cas, let me say this is a first place contest kind of write. I'm spellbound by its simple beauty and depth. This kind of write can only come from a soul that thinks and feels and is continually alive in thoughtful contemplation. I marvel at your skill and sit at your feet to hear more! Casarah Nance June 24, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thank you for you encouraging comment!

Daniel Turner June 22, 2018 at 1:36 AM This is wonderful Cass. " We are not a never nor are we a forever" love that line! Good luck! Casarah Nance June 24, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thank you ;)

James Marshall Goff June 21, 2018 at 7:18 PM Cool....similar vein as my poem you visited earlier....love the poem, love the theme Casarah Nance June 21, 2018 at 7:35 PM I guess great minds think alike! is yours for the contest?

Mystic Rose Rose June 21, 2018 at 5:53 PM We are all walking the margin of life, we all sooner or later join the after life, thanks for sharing such a meaningful poem Casarah Casarah Nance June 21, 2018 at 7:14 PM Thank you Pixie :)

Josh Heree June 21, 2018 at 4:58 PM What a wonderful poem.:) Casarah Nance June 21, 2018 at 7:13 PM Thank you Josh