The Last Thing That I Did Right

She cried upon my shoulder
With a damaged, broken heart
I couldn’t trust myself to hold her
Without passions giving start

Her bosoms pressed up against me
As she heaved a heavy sigh
I tried releasing her so gently
But my desire would not comply

She sobbed for a lover
Who I envied every night
He left her for another
Now I held her in her plight

Her body felt so warm
Then her lips caressed my neck
Inside I felt so torn
I could not allow this coming wreck

“I do not want to be alone
Please lie here next to me
Take me for your own
It is your destiny”

I am not a man of chivalry
I can be shallow and insecure
But something then inside of me
Knew I shouldn’t – and I was sure

She took off all her clothes
And she took me by the hand
Only heaven knows
Why I left her where she stands

I never saw that girl again
After that trying night
But this, I can say my friend
It was the last thing that I did right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/6/2014 10:01:00 AM
wew!!! .. brave man.. that's my guy!!! I hope ALL the man in earth has a name of JOE!!! .. :o0)
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Date: 5/5/2014 11:38:00 PM
Takes a great man to do that Joe...kudos Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 10:03:00 AM
and Tim?.. lol..
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