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The Last Thing

The last thing I saw On your face was A tear, as it rolled Down your beautiful face You're breathing became shallow You took one more Suddenly, there was silence No more breathing You were gone and now all is lost You were the glue that held The family together and the Last of the old school

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Date: 9/17/2023 12:46:00 PM
Awww Daisy so moving and sad! Lovely…Debx
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Daisy Ward
Date: 9/25/2023 10:52:00 AM
THANKS!

Book: Shattered Sighs