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The Last Tear

Still hidden underneath your stunning face A tear almost touches the corner of your eye. I tentatively kiss it as it shows itself with grace ... and suddenly you start to cry. Tomorrow is a word best left for the poet For only they truly dare to to face it While us, ignorant lovers, would just try to slow it, To make it eternal, or just... well... replace it. In bed and love, we use the other tongue, The one that explores your hidden desire And passionately whispers, "we're still young," Making me forget tomorrow's fate that is so dire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/13/2020 12:48:00 AM
It feels like in simple words you just poured your heart out. I am truly touched by it.
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Bogdan-Ioan Vaida
Date: 10/13/2020 2:58:00 AM
Thank you for the appreciation, I am touched :)
Date: 10/10/2020 12:40:00 PM
A poem filled with emotions and passion, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Bogdan-Ioan Vaida
Date: 10/12/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for creating the contest! And I'm grateful for the comment.
Date: 9/20/2020 4:39:00 PM
Deep emotions here...Well expressed
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Bogdan-Ioan Vaida
Date: 9/20/2020 10:20:00 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you were touched by it :)

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